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 Origins: Shadow Koonoonda

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PostSubject: Origins: Shadow Koonoonda   Tue Mar 29, 2011 5:27 am

This topic will contain the story of my first captain, (...That I got to Rank 10...) Shadow Koonoonda, when I post them. Each post here (By Me) will be a chapter. Don't worry, I've been told I'm a really good writer, so you should expect something spectacular!
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PostSubject: Re: Origins: Shadow Koonoonda   Tue Mar 29, 2011 5:49 am

Cool. This could be interesting.
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PostSubject: Re: Origins: Shadow Koonoonda   Tue Mar 29, 2011 5:56 pm

Blixafish wrote:
Cool. This could be interesting.

Thx, and I noticed that the dramatic chipmunk is a prairie dog once you said that in your sig.!
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PostSubject: Re: Origins: Shadow Koonoonda   Tue Mar 29, 2011 5:58 pm

Shadow99 wrote:
This topic will contain the story of my first captain, (...That I got to Rank 10...) Shadow Koonoonda, when I post them. Each post here (By Me) will be a chapter. Don't worry, I've been told I'm a really good writer, so you should expect something spectacular!

A really good writer, hm?
Seems like we at GAC have an active community.

I'd recommend an RPG,
they're great for showing of your writing skills.


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PostSubject: Re: Origins: Shadow Koonoonda   Tue Mar 29, 2011 6:02 pm

3DBlenderRender wrote:
Shadow99 wrote:
This topic will contain the story of my first captain, (...That I got to Rank 10...) Shadow Koonoonda, when I post them. Each post here (By Me) will be a chapter. Don't worry, I've been told I'm a really good writer, so you should expect something spectacular!

A really good writer, hm?
Seems like we at GAC have an active community.

I'd recommend an RPG,
they're great for showing of your writing skills.


Cheers,

3DBlenderRender

RPG as in role-playing game like WoW or DDO? Or something I don't know of?
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PostSubject: Re: Origins: Shadow Koonoonda   Tue Mar 29, 2011 7:25 pm

Shadow99 wrote:
3DBlenderRender wrote:
Shadow99 wrote:
This topic will contain the story of my first captain, (...That I got to Rank 10...) Shadow Koonoonda, when I post them. Each post here (By Me) will be a chapter. Don't worry, I've been told I'm a really good writer, so you should expect something spectacular!

A really good writer, hm?
Seems like we at GAC have an active community.

I'd recommend an RPG,
they're great for showing of your writing skills.


Cheers,

3DBlenderRender

RPG as in role-playing game like WoW or DDO? Or something I don't know of?

You can create RPGs with a program called RPGMaker. However, all are illegal except for XP out of Japan, South Korea and some other Asian places.
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PostSubject: Re: Origins: Shadow Koonoonda   Tue Mar 29, 2011 9:39 pm

Blixafish wrote:
Shadow99 wrote:
3DBlenderRender wrote:
Shadow99 wrote:
This topic will contain the story of my first captain, (...That I got to Rank 10...) Shadow Koonoonda, when I post them. Each post here (By Me) will be a chapter. Don't worry, I've been told I'm a really good writer, so you should expect something spectacular!

A really good writer, hm?
Seems like we at GAC have an active community.

I'd recommend an RPG,
they're great for showing of your writing skills.


Cheers,

3DBlenderRender

RPG as in role-playing game like WoW or DDO? Or something I don't know of?

You can create RPGs with a program called RPGMaker. However, all are illegal except for XP out of Japan, South Korea and some other Asian places.

Where can I find this, "RPGMaker?"
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PostSubject: Re: Origins: Shadow Koonoonda   Wed Mar 30, 2011 12:39 am

Shadow99 wrote:
Blixafish wrote:
Shadow99 wrote:
3DBlenderRender wrote:
Shadow99 wrote:
This topic will contain the story of my first captain, (...That I got to Rank 10...) Shadow Koonoonda, when I post them. Each post here (By Me) will be a chapter. Don't worry, I've been told I'm a really good writer, so you should expect something spectacular!

A really good writer, hm?
Seems like we at GAC have an active community.

I'd recommend an RPG,
they're great for showing of your writing skills.


Cheers,

3DBlenderRender

RPG as in role-playing game like WoW or DDO? Or something I don't know of?

You can create RPGs with a program called RPGMaker. However, all are illegal except for XP out of Japan, South Korea and some other Asian places.

Where can I find this, "RPGMaker?"

You should be able to download it. Make sure it's not free though, because if it is its pirated.
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PostSubject: Re: Origins: Shadow Koonoonda   Sun Apr 03, 2011 5:55 pm

Ok, here is the first chapter, sorry for the wait, I actually just started it today! sweat Anyway, I couldn't get the RPGMaker thing, so I'll just do this, tell me if you have any sugestions, and since pics. won't upload correctly, click here for Walv-I-Tusk image to show you what a Walv-I-Tusk looks like. (P.S. The creation it takes you to is Shadow.) Now the moment you've all been waiting for... ORIGINS: SHADOW KOONOONDA CHAPTER 1!
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Origins: Shadow Koonoonda

Chapter 1

Shadow was not always Shadow. He was born a prince to the king of the Walv-I-Tusk home world, Walvaka. He was your average prince, rude, spoiled, you know the like. Also his name wasn’t always Shadow, it was Lokaen, he earned the name while on the gladiator coliseum on- well, I’m getting ahead of myself... It all started in the Koonoonda Family Palace in Komodone City...

“He’s such a wonderful boy!” King Komodone’s wife, Jana Koonoonda exclaimed.

King Komodone nodded. “Yes, yes he is.”

It was a new day on the planet of Walvaka; Prince Lokaen had recently been born. He was the crown prince to his father’s throne, obviously making his twin sister, Jako, jealous, if she could talk, that is. She was born only a few mere seconds after Lokaen, giving him rightful throne, not her. The little prince opened his strange reptilian eyes and made a cooing noise. King Komodone smiled at his son and gripped his hand, Lokaen was only a month old an Komodone already saw great things in the boy. Suddenly, there was a commotion outside of the palace throne room where they sat, and a worried messenger stumbled in.

“My lord!” The messenger exclaimed. “Its President Si-Sok of the Gungonion Republic! His people, the Grox nearly drove them to extinction!”

Komodone’s eyes grew wide with surprise; Si-Sok was his close friend, though there had always been tension between the Gungonions of Zaxania, and the Walv-I-Tusk of Walvaka.

Komodone nodded in acknowledgement. “Tell Si-Sok I shall be there shortly.”

The messenger nodded and scrambled from the room.

“Si-Sok, is what I heard true?” King Komodone said to the president of the Gungonions.

The middle-aged Gungonion nodded in his hooded robe. “Yes, old friend. They attacked us without warning. We were not prepared, I tried to arm as many men as possible, but by the time a slightly capable army was mustered, the Grox had already taken control of the southern, eastern, and northern parts of Zaxania... I evacuated as many of us as I could into our shuttles, but Zaxania was lost...”

Si-Sok then began to sob from the loss of his home-world, Komodone placed his exo-skeletal hand on the Gungonion’s shoulder in sympathy, and then Si-Sok swore that someday, maybe not in his life time, his people would return to Zaxania once again.
The king spoke in sympathy. “I will give you and your people refuge on the closest planet I know of to Zaxania, our moon, Walkon. I’d let the Gungonions stay here, but with our eternality, were suffering from over-population as of late.

It was true, the Walv-I-Tusk were eternal, and Komodone had discovered how to reverse aging himself, when his people were nothing more than a tribe. After all, he was a well-respected scientist in the Galactic Community.

Si-Sok turned to face Komodone, a smile on his face. “Thank you, Komodone.”

Komodone smiled. “Anytime Si-Sok, anytime.”

Komodone turned away from him then, and started towards the door from the meeting hall were the two leaders spoke. But before he took his leave he turned around and said to the Gungonion. “Oh and Si-Sok, you may believe that what I am about to say is to much of hospitality, as his your peoples’ philosophy. But I believe that to cheer up the spirits of you and your peoples, a feast is in order. I shall make preparations right away.”

And then the King of the Walv-I-Tusk left the meeting hall. Leaving the Gungonion President curious on what made Komodone such a nice person.
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