Galactic Harmony

I had this great new idea for an adventure, possibly a series. I probably won't be able to make this for a while, for a number of reasons: 1. I'm already in the middle of an adventure series. 2. I haven't thought up much of it yet. 3. My computer is broken.

So far, all I've come up with is the basic idea of the adventure, and a cool banner. Here's the banner first:



As you can see from the banner, the adventure will be about my favorite species, the Orthavian, and Parkaboy's remake of the aforementioned species. I like to call them the Ravistic Orthavians. By nature, the Ravistic Orthavians are more aggressive and less intelligent than the original Orthavians. Click the spoiler button to read about the history of this species:

Spoiler:

 

Legend has it that thousands and thousands of years ago, when space travel for the Orthavians was just becoming popular, a group of prisoners charged for an inexcusable crime were to be punished. The punishment was that they would be condemned to planet Ravis, a planet in the same solar system as Norion, the Orthavian's home planet. So they were dropped off on the planet, but they were forgot about for a long time, and when the Orthavians came to visit Ravis, they found that the prisoners had created a substantial population and they were running a space program of their own. Since these Orthavians had evolved to suit the environment of Ravis, they were considered a different species, and called the Ravistic Orthavians. They were more military-based than the Orthavians, who mainly ran on an economic system. The Ravistics and the Orthavians mainly avoid each other today, so as to avoid war. Even the Ravistics knew that they should avoid an empire as powerful as the Orthavians.

The adventure will probably be about the Ravistics accusing the Orthavians of a crime that they didn't commit, then threatening them with some kind of super-weapon that could endanger the Orthavian empire as a whole. The captain will be on the Orthavian's side, trying to stop the Ravistics from employing the weapon. But there will be a really great plot twist, all right. The weapon will probably be something that the Orthavians didn't expect...

So if anyone likes this idea, wants to praise me for being so imaginative, or has any suggestions, please say so! Your input is much appreciated!

GA's without Plot twists are nothin'.

This idea sounds great! Really good idea too! Will be looking forward to it!

interesting, you've really outdone yourself with that back story

sounds cool! ... i have an adventuer in the works too.... WORM WARS!!!!