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trembler95 Blue Spice
Posts : 117 Upvotes: : 0 Join date : 2010-08-27 Age : 28 Location : I once stepped in a deep fryer then ate my foot. Guess which one was the mistake.
| Subject: Should this continue? Sat Sep 25, 2010 3:27 pm | |
| When I first got GA I started making a series called Deep Space Panic. It was about a military training base on a small planet that was consistently calling in a captain to help with their problems. That captain is of course you.
But after the 3rd part I stopped making new episodes and I have lots of ideas for new parts as well. But I'm not sure if they're worth continuing.
So I just wanna ask ig a few people could play them, then tell me if I should continue them or if there is any improvement I could put in to make them more appealing.
I'll put the links here:
Part 1: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=ftr-adventure%3Ausr-trembler95%7C2268610436%3Asast-500377807155
Part 2: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=ftr-adventure%3Ausr-trembler95%7C2268610436%3Asast-500379907745
Part 3: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=ftr-adventure%3Ausr-trembler95%7C2268610436%3Asast-500382827338
(Keep in mind these are the first adventures I ever created so they might not be the best) | |
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Gelatino95 Silver Spice
Posts : 3501 Upvotes: : 9 Join date : 2010-06-27 Age : 28 Location : Dinosaur Planet
| Subject: Re: Should this continue? Sat Sep 25, 2010 3:52 pm | |
| Sorry, I can't play them because my %@&€!ing computer is broken!
But I have had similar experiences. When I first started the Gelatino95 account, the first adventure was called The Swarm. It was the first part in a trilogy. So far I have released the first and second parts, but I got kind of stuck on the third and can't complete it for multiple reasons. | |
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camelfox Bronze Spice
Posts : 1915 Upvotes: : 4 Join date : 2010-06-11 Age : 27 Location : here you idiot.
| Subject: Re: Should this continue? Sat Sep 25, 2010 4:46 pm | |
| mm... i'll try and play them soon. then i'll feed you back.
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Pintoz Moderator
Posts : 2485 Upvotes: : 4 Join date : 2010-06-19 Age : 27 Location : Everywhere, nowhere.
| Subject: Re: Should this continue? Sat Sep 25, 2010 8:54 pm | |
| Hmm..
I shall check them out if i find them interesting. | |
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Daxter Blue Spice
Posts : 89 Upvotes: : 0 Join date : 2010-09-19 Age : 26 Location : Everywhere, Nowhere, and absolutly somewhere (possibly about to kill you.
| Subject: Re: Should this continue? Sat Sep 25, 2010 10:36 pm | |
| I'll try to play it ASAP, once I'm back with my mac. Stupid PCs | |
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Dark_Plague Bronze Spice
Posts : 1630 Upvotes: : 4 Join date : 2010-08-27 Age : 24 Location : Canada, Somewhere freezing my ass
| Subject: Re: Should this continue? Sat Sep 25, 2010 11:48 pm | |
| Deep Space Panic sounds like an awesome series! Will play ASAP! | |
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Pintoz Moderator
Posts : 2485 Upvotes: : 4 Join date : 2010-06-19 Age : 27 Location : Everywhere, nowhere.
| Subject: Re: Should this continue? Sun Sep 26, 2010 10:11 am | |
| - mrbean5317 wrote:
- Deep Space Panic sounds like an awesome series!
Will play ASAP! Dude, I love your sig.. But anyway, I'll check them out today if i have the time. | |
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Chachacha
Posts : 6 Upvotes: : 0 Join date : 2010-09-19
| Subject: Re: Should this continue? Sun Sep 26, 2010 4:27 pm | |
| I played all three and enjoyed them. Mostly because of the humor and the personalities you made. The story is getting a nice twist now I think. I wanna see more :) | |
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trembler95 Blue Spice
Posts : 117 Upvotes: : 0 Join date : 2010-08-27 Age : 28 Location : I once stepped in a deep fryer then ate my foot. Guess which one was the mistake.
| Subject: Re: Should this continue? Sun Sep 26, 2010 7:39 pm | |
| - Chachacha wrote:
- I played all three and enjoyed them. Mostly because of the humor and the personalities you made. The story is getting a nice twist now I think.
I wanna see more :) Thanks! I'm glad you liked them. Maybe I'll start Part 4 soon. | |
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camelfox Bronze Spice
Posts : 1915 Upvotes: : 4 Join date : 2010-06-11 Age : 27 Location : here you idiot.
| Subject: Re: Should this continue? Sun Sep 26, 2010 10:48 pm | |
| played. very good. R+ed. continue it please. | |
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trembler95 Blue Spice
Posts : 117 Upvotes: : 0 Join date : 2010-08-27 Age : 28 Location : I once stepped in a deep fryer then ate my foot. Guess which one was the mistake.
| Subject: Re: Should this continue? Tue Sep 28, 2010 1:06 am | |
| Well I'm getting alot of really nice comments. I'm gonna get started on Part 4 right away! | |
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Loon Pink Spice
Posts : 270 Upvotes: : 0 Join date : 2010-08-27 Age : 916 Location : Somewhere under the rainbow..
| Subject: Re: Should this continue? Tue Sep 28, 2010 4:07 am | |
| Downloaded all 3. I'll give some feedback as soon as I get through them **Edit ** Got a chance to play the first one. Good story and character development. The only critique I would have is to take a little more time on the surroundings, like sinking down some of the buildings so they don't appear to be floating.. So, yes, please continue the series. Will be playing another one next start up | |
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