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PostSubject: Eden Series   Fri Sep 24, 2010 1:50 am

Hello GAC! I haven't been on for a long time; school's been really busy and any spare time I do have has been put into playing Halo: Reach. Anyway, I'm currently in the works of a fairly new, four-part adventure series, Eden, and I'm looking for a little feedback/ 1st impressions on how you guys think the series will go. Here's the backstory:


In the fairly distant future, humans have spread beyond the confines of the Sol system to colonize many worlds. Initial contact with alien life was tense; humans were self-righteous and imperialistic, traits that did not bode well with their neighboors. Nonetheless, humans continued to encroach on alien space and colonized nearly 100 planets in systems as far as Delta Pavonis, 20 light years from Sol. Humans preoccupied themselves with mining highly valuable rhodium ore and the militarization of mining colonies and outposts.

Despite a fairly successful rhodium trade and a notorious reputation throughout the galaxy, humans had never developed a viable method of terraforming their worlds to increase production and alleviate overpopulation. Other empires were far less than eager to share their terraforming technology, so humans attempted to develop their own method, codenamed: Projet SoL. Decades of failed attempts would lead the humans' quest for terraforming technology to its silent climax on a seemingly innocuous world: A-3, or the "Dustbowl" in the Altair system...

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Tempest Frigate
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Intro
Part 1
Part 2 coming this weekend


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PostSubject: Re: Eden Series   Fri Sep 24, 2010 3:32 am

Sounds like a good start, love the back story.
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PostSubject: Re: Eden Series   Fri Sep 24, 2010 3:34 am

Gruesome pic for part 1 tupps! Will be giving it a try sometime soon
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PostSubject: Re: Eden Series   Fri Sep 24, 2010 5:19 pm

Looks awesome! Will play when got the time.
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PostSubject: Re: Eden Series   Fri Sep 24, 2010 10:01 pm

thanks for the feedback.

if future readers play the adventures, i'd love to hear your guys' comments, feedback, and adventure suggestions and i'll see if i can incorporate them in future installments or the sequel series "Quasar"
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PostSubject: Re: Eden Series   Tue Oct 12, 2010 1:39 am

Mind the double post, but if people on the forum have played the Intro and Part 1, then they might want to know that Part 2 has a tentative release date of Friday, October 29.

Still looking for feedback from the forum. Suggestions and cirtiques are always welcome.
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PostSubject: Re: Eden Series   Tue Oct 12, 2010 2:30 am

nice, two days before the hall'o'weens
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PostSubject: Re: Eden Series   Wed Oct 13, 2010 8:58 pm

Yeah, kinda meant to do that. I'll try and get future installments out faster than two months after the previous...
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PostSubject: Re: Eden Series   Wed Oct 13, 2010 9:06 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Eden Series   Tue Oct 26, 2010 2:00 am

Eden- Part 2 is scheduled to come out this weekend!

I originally planned for a Friday release, but school kept getting in the way, so I'm putting it off until probably late Saturday or sometime Sunday so it gives me more time to work on it.

If anyone in the GAC is interested, I'd love to hear your critiques, things I could improve on or add for future installments, etc.
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PostSubject: Re: Eden Series   Tue Mar 15, 2011 4:48 am

Whoever "Destroy" is, you must know this:
That's someone's sig, no one needs to be going off-topic for that.
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