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PostSubject: Soldiers   Sat Aug 28, 2010 5:14 am

I've got two different species that both play major roles in one of my storylines as the bulk of each side's infantry. Anyone wiling to give me some feedback on them?

Here's the Protan:


And here's the Galahan (With and without cybernetic)


Heres their links (respectively) for if anyone wants to see them via editor:
http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-TheExodus%7C500357048504%3Asast-500639410595%3Apg-20
http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-TheExodus%7C500357048504%3Asast-500542325198%3Apg-140
http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-TheExodus%7C500357048504%3Asast-500549429900%3Apg-120

I've also got more versions of the Galahan with slighly different armour/cybernetics, but they're all mostly like those two.
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PostSubject: Re: Soldiers   Sat Aug 28, 2010 5:34 am

The head design on the first one is cool, but it looks like you got lazy with the eyes... Also consider using some different parts for the armor. Experiment with the parts, and remember that you don't have to use only captain parts.

As for the second ones, I really like the use of weapon parts. But once again, the armor is too uniform and needs some variation. In both creatures, the coloring is very bland and could be improved.

Sorry if that sounded too critical, I was just being a pessimist and focusing on the things that could be improved. I hope my advice helps.
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PostSubject: Re: Soldiers   Sat Aug 28, 2010 5:58 am

Thanks for the info!
And no, you didn't sound too critical. I wasn't expecting them to be perfect, that's why I asked for some critique.
Thanks for the help.
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PostSubject: Re: Soldiers   Sat Aug 28, 2010 5:25 pm

The outfitting on them is great but the eyes on the first one look a little bit off.
I like the last 2 the most.
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PostSubject: Re: Soldiers   Sat Aug 28, 2010 9:00 pm

Thanks, I'm pretty fond of the last two myself. I consider them one of my better species.
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