Reunion Part 1-2

I've been creating a serires of adventures called Reunion which is based on my 7 captains. So far I've only created 2 but if someone could play them and give me some feedback I'd really appreciate it.

Here's the links:

Part 1: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=ftr-adventure%3Ausr-trembler95%7C2268610436%3Asast-500573307078

Part 2: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=ftr-adventure%3Ausr-trembler95%7C2268610436%3Asast-500593618688

The wording isn't very great and the plot isn't quite clear, but I put alot of effort into these so please ty them out.

I'll try them out.

downloaded. got a lot on me plate, but i'll try and play them.

The adventures are good but they need something...

lonestar4 wrote:

The adventures are good but they need something...

Do you have any idea what? Any ideas on how to improve my adventures would be great.

i'll play them soon. i have a good eye for small details.