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PostSubject: Reunion Part 1-2   Fri Aug 27, 2010 4:24 pm

I've been creating a serires of adventures called Reunion which is based on my 7 captains. So far I've only created 2 but if someone could play them and give me some feedback I'd really appreciate it.

Here's the links:

Part 1: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=ftr-adventure%3Ausr-trembler95%7C2268610436%3Asast-500573307078

Part 2: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=ftr-adventure%3Ausr-trembler95%7C2268610436%3Asast-500593618688

The wording isn't very great and the plot isn't quite clear, but I put alot of effort into these so please ty them out.
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PostSubject: Re: Reunion Part 1-2   Fri Aug 27, 2010 4:34 pm

I'll try them out.
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PostSubject: Re: Reunion Part 1-2   Fri Aug 27, 2010 5:14 pm

downloaded. got a lot on me plate, but i'll try and play them.
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PostSubject: Re: Reunion Part 1-2   Sat Aug 28, 2010 5:28 pm

The adventures are good but they need something...
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PostSubject: Re: Reunion Part 1-2   Sun Aug 29, 2010 2:31 am

lonestar4 wrote:
The adventures are good but they need something...

Do you have any idea what? Any ideas on how to improve my adventures would be great.
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PostSubject: Re: Reunion Part 1-2   Sun Aug 29, 2010 2:32 am

i'll play them soon. i have a good eye for small details.
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