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PostSubject: The Ostrich   The Ostrich EmptyTue Jul 13, 2010 5:54 am

I made this for WildxSpirits who was having a little trouble figuring out where to post. She'll put a description and link up in just a sec.... :Wink:
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PostSubject: Re: The Ostrich   The Ostrich EmptyTue Jul 13, 2010 6:24 am

Thank you again, Mudo! <3

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The Ostrich is my newest adventure, which is not entirely finished. I am VERY open to suggestions, so please feel free to let me know something that could be included and/or improved! The storyline itself is about an ostrich, whom discovers something about himself at the end of the adventure... But I won't spoil it.

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PostSubject: Re: The Ostrich   The Ostrich EmptyTue Jul 13, 2010 6:34 am

Looks great, I'll play it asap and send you my feedback.
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PostSubject: Re: The Ostrich   The Ostrich EmptyTue Jul 13, 2010 4:53 pm

I'll be happy to play it, hopefully my GA won't go ape on me and crash again, but if it doesn't. I'll be happy to send some feedback.
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PostSubject: Re: The Ostrich   The Ostrich EmptyTue Jul 13, 2010 5:32 pm

I'm gonna play it this morning, then work on that mission we were talking about last night. ;)
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PostSubject: Re: The Ostrich   The Ostrich EmptyWed Jul 14, 2010 9:51 am

I loved it! for an unexperienced adventure creator this is really good! no not good amazing! :XD: i was never able to make such great adventures when i first started! but you are able cuz it rocked! :XD: it was a bit short but that dosen't always matter! and in the case it dosen't matter! good job Wild good job! Cheers! tupps! :Wink: exited! :XD: :XD: :XD: :D: razz mcgreen Cheers! tupps! Wistle :XD: :XD:
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PostSubject: Re: The Ostrich   The Ostrich EmptyWed Jul 14, 2010 8:58 pm

Hmmm... It was too short. Also the ending was dissatisfying. Too sudden. Try making it more of a slow understanding. Also the dogs were almost completely incapable of seeing me. Raise awareness and maybe use some advanced A.I.

Otherwise, the scenery was quite good, and it was a solid adventure. With tuning it could be something really special. :)
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PostSubject: Re: The Ostrich   The Ostrich EmptyWed Jul 14, 2010 9:27 pm

patented mudokon feedback :)
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PostSubject: Re: The Ostrich   The Ostrich EmptyWed Jul 14, 2010 9:36 pm

Thank you very much, Mudo!

As soon as I finish up my llama adventure [ or at least some more of it ] I will work on it some more. I may end up pretty much remaking the entire thing [ at least the acts and such ]. xD

Thanks again everyone. =]
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PostSubject: Re: The Ostrich   The Ostrich EmptyThu Jul 15, 2010 4:07 am

I'll play it asap in the morning! BTW, can u buddy me in Spore and on here? I'll buddy you too!
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PostSubject: Re: The Ostrich   The Ostrich EmptyThu Jul 15, 2010 4:19 am

Oh yeah and WildxSpirits, did u just start playing Spore this year? I suspect that you did since you've only created 31 creations. I'm not saying that you need more, but I'm just wondering, that's all.
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PostSubject: Re: The Ostrich   The Ostrich EmptyThu Jul 15, 2010 11:37 am

Actually.. No. I've had it since early to late 2008. I just really only have a few things I consider okay to publish lol. =] I just only recently got my online account working, my game had some strange glitch or something like "cannot register game" and "you do not have the required spore.com privileges" but it's all fixed now. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: The Ostrich   The Ostrich EmptyThu Jul 15, 2010 4:08 pm

Ok! good to know that ur back on now:) Anyway, that wasn't crappy at all! The adventure was very detailed and made sense (somehow...). Although it wasn't one of those long, intruging adventures where you take like 2 hours but then u fail and then start all over again, it was plain but very funny, cool, and somewhat challenging because of the dogs. Be CCONFIDENT!!!! Sorry, I just wanted to say that;)
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PostSubject: Re: The Ostrich   The Ostrich EmptyThu Jul 15, 2010 6:55 pm

Drago183 wrote:
Be CCONFIDENT!!!! Sorry, I just wanted to say that;)

I agree w/Drago
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PostSubject: Re: The Ostrich   The Ostrich EmptyMon Jul 19, 2010 12:25 am

Wow, That looks really cool. Just by the pic i can feel it's awesomeness!..

Yupp, I mean it!

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